Wow :D
I can see that A LOT of effort was put into this flash. the graphics are good, the storyline is interesting, and the music is also good. one thing i think you should work on is the voices, im not saying they're bad but maybe you could tone down the empty sound in the background, and make the voices more...interesting, more into it, if you know what i mean.
overall good job. im voting 5 to save this flash.